In my book a girl named Hannah lives with her jewish family. One day she had a special dinner with her whole family. She drank some of the wine and she got drunk. She walked to her room as she dazed off into a different world back into 1933-1945. She faded into Germany back when the Holocaust was starting. She just got captured by the germans and is on her way to what she thinks its a concentration camp. Her and her family were on the verge of getting married but they didn't because they were captured by the jews. They Just arrived at the train station.
In my book recently my main character Hanna has just had an Aha moment. They were just captured and were sent to ride along in a truck with Nazis. Then they stopped but when they stopped Hanna thought to her self "wait the trains!". I stopped and asked my self how might this change things? In my opinion this is going to change by all the characters from Hanna's family freaking out and causing chaos. I think i just found the conflict to my story.
I am reading the same book and its amazing. I really liked the words you used in your summary.
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